Flash fiction #3: The lonely man.



There had always been a yarn to tell about the lonely man, a tall tale of butchery and grue exclusively recounted by lamplight in the midnight hour. The legacy of a thousand lost lovers, the torment of a hundred lost children, each perfectly recounted to an audience of rarely dismissive teens.

            Gabi had heard the stories before, and, like most with a modicum of commonsense, refuted each and every word.

            “Go on then,” Jackie said stiffly, “take the long walk.” She smiled sharply. “Unless you’re chicken.”

            Gabi snarled, slipped between the bushes and the evergreens, and was gone – erased by a diminishing light.

            The world ahead was a dire place: rank, dark, and comfortless.

            She followed the path as it snaked around the gentle ascent of the hillock. A fox ran ahead of her. It was skinny and sickly looking, easily the runt of a much larger litter.

            Surely I have to be nearly there by now.

  Surely I can’t be far from the top.

            And there, beyond the clot of darkness, she saw a pinch of blue sky framed gracelessly between the branches of dead or dying trees. She smiled; reassured.

            The fox, perhaps sensing something new, stalled ahead of her and reared its head into the air. It sniffed at the air, whined, and bolted back the way it came.

            She crept through what remained of the gloom, towards the light. It was then she noticed it: a cottage. It was black and rotten. Its windows (of which there were only two), smashed and covered by the tattered remains of floral netting. Outside the cottage, perched on an old bench overlooking the parkland bellow, sat an old man working tirelessly on something she could not quite discern. Cutting ... calving ... raking and shredding.

            “Can I help?” He asked without ever looking up.

            “No ... no, I’m sorry. I was just walking.”

            “Do people still do that ? Walk. It’s usually cars and motorcycles these days.” He said dreamily. “Would you sit with me a while? I’m such a lonely man these days.”

            “Don’t you have family? Friends?”

            He shook his head, no.

“Do you really think I have either friend or family left at my age?” He chuckled at that, still without looking back at her. “No, my dear, they’re all gone.”

            “I really should get back. My friends ... they’re waiting.”

            “Then bring them up ... everyone’s welcome.”

            Now the old man did turn. A dark and jagged half-smile calved into his craggy features. And as his lips parted, she briefly saw a bloated and bloodied tongue roll over the shattered stumps of his remaining teeth.

            “Oh, Jesus ...” Her voice was merely a whisper, harsh and terrified.

            The old man stood and the severed head of some unknown infant dropped from his lap and rolled towards her. Flesh and sinew all but stripped from its eyeless face. The maw cleaved into some sickening jokers grin.

            Run! Run you silly girl.

            But the thought came too late.

            The old man bore down upon her, seizing her wrist in a single hand, and drew the rusty blade against her cheek.

            “You should have listened to your friend,” he said, and smashed the young girls head against the side of the cabin. Her skull gave with a sickening crack as jets of blood squirted from her ears.

            He smiled as he hunkered down upon her.

            He would be alone again soon, he knew, once the light in her eyes had gone out. Before that though, before she was frosty to touch, he would have his fun. Afterwards he would make a totem of her bones and add her to the ashes of so many who had come before her.

            He was a lonely man, certainly, but curiosity made sure he was only a lonely man for a short while.

            He craned forward a little, undid his zipper, and whispered into her ear.


 “Now, shall we begin?”




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